What I See

soulschool jigsaw

working a puzzle,
(over)thinking, and seeing
only sky pieces

—dotty seiter

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Notes about poem and art:
• “soulschool jigsaw” gave me a bit of a runaround. I drafted and revised and tweaked and rewrote, trying to discover exactly what it was I wanted to say while also adhering to traditional haiku format in this poem about the spiritual paradox of the mind as a barrier to true seeing; the irony of overanalyzing a poem about overanalyzing did not escape me!
• On the final morning of my June vacation, before packing up my art supplies to head home, I brushed freeform swirls and patches of water into each quadrant of a page in my sketchbook, then dropped watercolor into each. Now, weeks later, what I see in one quadrant is The Friend With the Messy Bun.



One response to “What I See”

  1. First your knitting friend! If you didn’t point out that she was there I wouldn’t have picked her out! Now my eye goes straight to her eye which could have been just a oval shape!

    Not that I mind meeting your friend and her high coiffure !

    Don’t we all seek out the special pieces..sky…earth…tree, when doing a puzzle? I feel that it clear seeing and thinking!

    Love the play of words: thinking/seeing/ sky/ puzzle!

    Links with the puzzle pieces of your knitting friend along with the sky around her.

    Like

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In 2014, I grab an unexpected opportunity to paint.

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