Musica

ripe

in the heart of august, harvesting pollen,
a bumble bee hunts and hovers,
hums in the hibiscus beside me,
cream-white dust on face and furry back,

leg baskets heavy,

while i eat breakfast on the deck,
relishing the sweet-tang of burst blueberry,
rereading a well-loved novel,
harvesting the chances and choices
of mina, dicey, tamer, and bullet.

sudden tears well up and spill, my heart
insufficient to the task of holding the deeply human music
of these friends of mine between the pages,
these friends, connecting, guessing, stumbling,
hurting, mending, laughing.

we are all of us harvesting what has been planted,

humming songs at once mournful
and praise-filled, grieving and grateful.

                                               (for Cynthia Voigt)

—dotty seiter

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Notes about poem and art:
• I am in love with process! With the rush of inspiration, the tumble of words, the engagement of refining, the challenge of mis-takes, the floundering of compasslessness, the surprise of discovery, and the following practice described by a character in one of Cynthia Voigt‘s books—This had been the pattern of his days on the back creek, too: he would move the boat out until he felt more frightened than he had the courage to match; then he would anchor and wait. Yes! to all of the above, which energized and nourished me as I wrote “ripe.”
• In early August I participated in artist Amy Maricle’s 2026 Inchie Challenge, a call to create small pieces of art on as many 2 x 2-inch squares as desired over the course of a week. Salt Marsh Makes and Unmakes Itself is one of the inchies I created. It came to mind when I wrote “ripe” in response to Cynthia Voigt’s Come a Stranger, a story set in the salt marsh environment of Crisfield, Maryland.



14 responses to “Musica”

  1. “we are all of us harvesting what has been planted,” resounded with me…… literally and metaphorically!

    I also follow Amy and her slow drawing mediative process, mainly to remind myself that it’s OK to slow down a bit. Great little piece that could in scale be much larger! Wonder what Dorothy will do with all her million inchie squares?

    Just to let you know I am in to comment, my little avatar showing….. but the “Howdy carol lee ” has disappeared!

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    1. Carol, thank you for isolating that line and letting me know it resonates fully with you.

      My inchies are actually not so vast in number! At this point, many of them are in my sketchbook, many to a single page. Quite tame : )

      Am I understanding correctly that you didn’t have to sign in above to comment but could just click on “leave a comment” and go?

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      1. It wanted reassurance that it was ME! Now for this reply they want a log in. Although my avatar shows in the WordPress bar. Don’t you love computers?

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        1. Phooey! We may have surpassed any intelligence I can bring to the situation. Thank you again for jumping the hurdles in the obstacle course so faithfully, Carol. xo

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  2. Wonderful, your poem touched my heart.

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    1. Thank you, Simone. The experience was one of such overflowing fullness.

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  3. Thank you for this delightful sensory glimpse into your poetic breakfast on the deck with one of your favorite books. I was fed by what you planted and harvested.

    Your notes about the poem are as poetic as the poem itself. I especially love the line the floundering of compasslessness.

    The little landscape is a perfect pairing.

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    1. MaryAnn, thanks for your comments/feedback. That breakfast on the deck with Come a Stranger was so sensory and so soul-filled. Grateful that my sharing fed you, too, by what I planted and harvested. Also delighted that you enjoyed my notes about the poem—I do take such pleasure in writing.

      I was tickled that one of my inchies serendipitously paired with my poem : )

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  4. “sweet-tang of burst blueberry“

    Wonderful sensory image! Glad you kept the hyphen.

    Love being able to picture you soaking in abundance on your deck.

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  5. Sylvia, LOL re the hyphen! Thank you for celebrating it with me. It makes a difference, yes? I confess, I love geeking about these finer points of poetry.

    Thanks for letting me know you’re able to picture my soaking in abundance on my back deck; so happy when my words can pass along a simple gift of that sort.

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  6. THIS!

    we are all of us harvesting what has been planted,

    humming songs at once mournful
    and praise-filled, grieving and grateful.

    Grieving and grateful – the title of my recent years. So much to grieve, so much to be grateful for – like books reread, your poetry and art, the wind through the horse chestnuts trees dropping spongy bombs on passersby…xoxoxoxo

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    1. OMG: horse chestnuts dropping spongy bombs on passersby! SO MUCH in this world! and all of it at once—mournful and praising, grieving and grateful : )

      Lola, thank you for your heartfeft sharing xoxoxo

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  7. I love your inchie, Dotty. What a lovely piece! It seems so vast to me, which speaks to your ability to create a sense of depth. WOW!

    humming songs at once mournful
    and praise-filled, grieving and grateful.

    How often do my thoughts swing from feeling footloose and fancy-free, to deep sadness, to feeling immensely grateful? They are all living inside us, side by side, day by day.
    Grieving and grateful. Yes.

    Thank you for the introduction to these characters, and the book. 🙂

    xoxo

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    1. Thanks, Sheila! I agree, so many paradoxes co-existing in us, speaking to the fullness of life.

      I have been reading Cynthia Voigt’s so-named Tillerman Cycle of books (7 exquisitely interrelated young adult novels) since 1989. I just reread the entire cycle once again this summer, bringing my reading/rereading of those paricular seven books to 29. Voigt’s writing is deep and true; the characters lives touch me profoundly every time.

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