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Hiding in Plain Sight

november 26
early evening, no wind.

from nearby,
under a dome of night sky
the bark-like honks
of a canada goose,

followed by the
collective honking
of many canada geese

all of them cutting loose,
floating on a wetland stage
under cover of darkness
and partially obscured by
a ragged-edged curtain of dry
scrub
and milkweed,
not a one feeling any need
to hold back
like so many musicians
wearing dark jackets
and starched white shirts,
priming their flugelhorns

and lateral tympaniforms
for tonight’s late show—

the first of a southern flyway tour—
while i stand backstage

and catch the gift
and musical riffs
of their raucous rehearsal

—dotty seiter

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working title: Come Out Where I Can See You
~5 x 7″; oil, pigment stick, and collage on paper
sketch for Let’s Face It With Friends series
2025

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Notes about poem and art:
• “november 26” was inspired by Ted Kooser, a poet who, recovering from cancer in late 1998, had to stay out of the sun, and began taking daily 2-mile walks before dawn after which he wrote poems. My poem here arose from an after-dusk walk in the dark of a November evening.
• While taking a previously-mentioned Jane Davies 90-minute Zoom class in September, I reached impulsively for a large sheet of used palette paper sent to me by artist Lola Jovan, tore off a section, availed myself of pigment sticks, made a few marks to indicate a found face, and added a few bits of collage.



4 responses to “Hiding in Plain Sight”

  1. Love the comparison of the honking of geese to musicians on tour! I can hear their honks! Your imagination knows no boundaries!

    Found face in an ancient stone!

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    1. Carol, thanks for your encouragement with my writing. Love that you can hear the musicians’ honks : ) I am learning bit by bit that I can grow my imagination; happy discovery!

      “Found face in an ancient stone”—wow! love that! (speaking of boundless imagination)

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    Joyful Puttering

    Every time I see a flock of geese flying overhead I pause. and watch. Now I’ll be listening and looking for music while I watch.

    And your found face is now in plain sight. Simply delightful!

    Happy day after Christmas!

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    1. MaryAnn, happy Boxing Day to you, too!

      The Branta canadensis on tour that appear in my poem were the standout bit of one of our late November passeggiate; quite wonderful!

      Love that you “get” the found face’s coming into plain sight. The seek and find provided a way in to playing with faces. I was grateful for a starting place.

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