Compliments and a Full Complement

going fishing
           —after brian andreas, from It’s Fish for Compliments Day

fish-for-compliments day is the best, she says.
totally, he says. we never run out of compliments.
your gardens are spectacular, she says.
he says, i love your sexy legs.
nobody surpasses you at offering countless options, she says.
you excel at cost-per-wear with your clothes, he says.
you’re an expert, she says, at changing your clothes all day long.
you are tops at using the passenger brake pedal when i drive, he says.
she says, kudos to you for your sink trap food blindness.
wait, he says, have we just run out?

she laughs. 
                        never! she says.

—dotty seiter

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Notes on poem and art:
• I had a grand time “going fishing” for some of the affectionate banter in this poem, reflecting as it does a long-standing committed relationship. I’m grateful to Brian Andreas for A Story Every Day from Flying Edna in my email inbox, and for the particular story that prompted this poem.
• With the completion of Speaking the Ineffable, I now have a full complement of blackberry lily color swatches. Last year I captured this plant at two stages in its life cycle but both stages were post-flowering (see below); now, a year later, I finally captured this garden favorite in bloom! I’ve chosen to pair examples from my color swatches series here with today’s poem because the paintings represent a melding of Dave’s gardening and my painting, two pursuits of ours that complement each other beautifully and, as you may have surmised, because the poem is also Dave-and-Dotty centric (in its compliments) : )



One response to “Compliments and a Full Complement”

  1. First thanks for the link to Brian. Signed up for stories…. love short simple stories… love his comic like drawings!

    Love your poem about your banter with Dave… and the compliments… also nice to give and receive! Even when a bit ironic!

    Love the swatch series…. at first thought it was a tiger lily… not familiar with blackberry lily. Those color swatches ….. I am always in awe..

    Would it be alright to download them and sort of make a folder named Dotty’s Color swatches to view all the color combinations?

    So wonderful that you have the various stages of their development. Waiting for the all the fall colors, something I really miss.

    Funny the blog recognizes me but to comment I have to log in to comment. When I view on chrome top right says reader carol lee with my small avatar.

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In 2014, I grab an unexpected opportunity to paint.

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