8 responses to “Outside and In, Inside and Out”

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   carol lee

   April 17, 2026 at 4:29 am

   Would love to visit ! Don’t know which house to choose. Guess there is something right about the saying that the left hand doesn’t know what the right hand is doing ! Guess you have lots of square, triangles and other geometric collage pieces: they all make houses 🏘️.

   Love the short tanka. Could have lots of interpretations, literal and subjective. The weather always changes, and a pearl is everlasting!

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      Dotty Seiter

      April 17, 2026 at 5:53 am

      Carol, I want to thank you again for drawing my attention to that MOOC poetry class last June. Although I had mixed feelings about various aspects of the class at times, I was committed to doing the coursework thoughtfully and I have tapped into learnings ever since. I’m grateful!

      It is fun to imagine the interiors of these houses—I like the roof of the one in the bottom right corner, and I’d like to see the layout of the tall skinny one bottom left : )

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         carol lee

         April 17, 2026 at 7:56 am

         I wasn’t the best student, think I got bogged down on the conceit poem. I may go and do it again.

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            Dotty Seiter

            April 17, 2026 at 9:09 am

            Keep me posted if you do the Coursera class again. Even though it presented what to me were challenging abstractions, it also imparted a bunch of concrete information that I’ve carried forward and valued and put into practice.

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   Joyful Puttering

   April 17, 2026 at 7:27 am

   Love this little poem. The joy…and the light will always return.

   I’m finding it kind of delightful that your head might have been done with the house series…but your heart and hands were not. What a wonderful and wonky little neighborhood you’ve created.

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      Dotty Seiter

      April 17, 2026 at 9:13 am

      Joy and light do persist, even when temporarily out of sight!

      Thank you for celebrating the wonky little neighborhood that my heart and hands (endless rain and clouds be damned!) knew enough to create, despite my obscuring thoughts.

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   lolajovan

   April 18, 2026 at 2:04 pm

   luminous lunar magnificance AND the hands doing other than what the mind is contemplating! What kind of outrageous magic is THIS? Love love LOVE this series. Not surprised the hands want to keep building homes… xo

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      Dotty Seiter

      April 18, 2026 at 2:39 pm

      I do miss seeing the moon when skies are cloud-covered but am grateful to know, as with SO many things in life, there is much that the eye cannot see but which nonetheless is extant!

      And, oh, indeed, what kind of outrageous magic when the hands are doing other than what the mind is contemplating hahaha!

      Thank you for the affirmation of this series. My wish going in is that I’d bump into something the way I bumped into my color swatches last summer and just kept going and going with such engagement each and every time. BUT that is not the way this series has played out, and I am grateful for the adventure just as it is!

      xoxo

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