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Tickets to Unexpected Places

Under the BigTop

i stop at the kitchen sink
to swallow a pill,
that pill, i think,
in fact
a ringling brothers barnum & bailey
admittance ticket to a small act
being performed
outside the window:
an acrobat outfitted
in a costume sporting
a bushy gray tail—
a costume perhaps worn recently by a political protester
waving an I’M NUTS ABOUT DEMOCRACY! sign?—
traverses the tightrope of pointed tips

atop slats in the stockade fence
across the back of the yard

nimbly and unhesitatingly
and, without breaking momentum,
scales the slope of one side of the garage roof effortlessly
and races down the slope of the other,
from there to dance through
the tangled maze of slender bare branches

in the pussywillow before
leaping beyond the three rings
and out the canvas flap of the circus tent,

not in any way spent,
nourished by nothing more than
the here-it-is-in-front-of-me
pleasure of moving from one place
to another
with balance and grace.

—dotty seiter

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Brought Into the Light and Examined
3 x 3″; watercolor on paper
card #35 in a color swatch series
2025

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Notes about poem and art:
• “Under” is a free verse poem of noticing.
Brought Into brought some surprises my way. I’d been planning for a few weeks to paint greens and berries from our backyard juniper tree, and I had an image in my mind. It wasn’t until I got up close and personal that I learned that a juniper’s juvenile foliage typically consists of sharp, hard, needle-like leaves and mature foliage is often scale-like and softer. See above: sure enough! Also, the berries—which aren’t even true berries but seed cones; who knew?!—take 2-3 years to ripen, and go through a range of colors from pale green to blue white to dark blue. I’d thought all the berries would be the beautiful blue white I remembered picking for indoor winter decorating years ago but, nope!, right now our tree has only some pale greenish berries leaning a bit towards blue along with a bunch of dark blue berries.



11 responses to “Tickets to Unexpected Places”

  1. Joyful Puttering Avatar
    Joyful Puttering

    Thanks for taking us along for the circus show from your kitchen window. I feel as if I was watching with you. Thank you for all the noticing.

    As I write this I’m sitting on the couch watching the bluebirds’ at the feeder and bath. They are also putting on quite a show and I appreciate the reminder to notice and celebrate the performance that is right in front of me.

    I love juniper and those bright blue berries (now I know they are seed cones) they can produce. I had access to some in Lexington and I watched them closely for the timing on the bright blue seeds cones. Thanks for filling me in on the timing of the colors.

    At the time I learned that the berries are not very tasty so are often overlooked by birds well into the winter. When the birds are desperate…they are there waiting and provide much needed nourishment.

    Thanks for the noticing…and learning journey this morning!

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    1. MaryAnn, the noticing is a gift—one that you yourself practice, receive, and share wonderfully! Thank you for bringing ‘your’ bluebirds to me at my desk just now : )

      Thanks, too, for more juniper info and your juniper memories.

      I’ll be watching to see what birds might visit our juniper and its neighboring winterberry. Fancifully, I can imagine bluebirds and bluejays at the juniper, cardinals at the winterberry hahaha!

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  2. I am chuckling at your costumed protester! Ha ha! Brilliant! And I am nodding and grateful over your reminders to notice. It is too easy for me to be swept up in my own thoughts and forget to see what is happening around me. Thank you for the equisite details about juniper seed cones! And another brilliant swatch, which is swoon-worthy. xoxo

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    1. Thanks for joining me in chuckling at the costumed protester!

      I am nodding and grateful for YOUR nodding and gratitude over my reminders to notice; I write the poems I need to read! Again and again and again I return my wayward attention to what is happening HERE and NOW.

      Those swatches—I am not tired of painting them yet! Happy to hear you are still swooning : ) xoxo

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  3. Who knew? Now we do! LOL. Thanks Dotty. 🙂 I love the “light”!

    I love the journey of little bushy tail. Made me wish for the super power to leap and climb and scamper nimbly and with grace. Some of that I could do as a kid. But I know for sure, I was klutzy more than graceful. 😆

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    1. Sheila, thanks for loving the “light” with me—I very much enjoyed painting those little color swatches, paying especial attention to the varied colors of the berries/seed cones about which I’d just gained new intel.

      Yes! to wishing for the super power of that gray squirrel who leapt, climbed, and scampered with what looked to be effortless ease, nimbleness, and grace. Mesmerizing!

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  4. Love how you compared the simple act of taking a pill to an admittance ticket to a circus of other images running,dancing and leaving “with grace and balance”.

    Oh the lovely evergreens! The harmony of the blues and greens. In Vienna they were so dark almost black! I never noticed berries on the evergreens here. Will have to be more observant.

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    1. Carol, thank you so much for shining light on how stopping at the sink to take a pill, usually such an almost autopilot action, became an admittance ticket to something else—that way of opening myself is a wonderful gift of having made a poetry-writing practice part of my modus operandi. I’m lovin’ it!

      Thanks for your feedback and thoughts about the lovely evergreens and the harmony of the blues and greens, along with your observation about the “dark almost black” of Viennese evergreens. With your keen oberservational abilities, I bet you’ll have a grand time paying attention to all the ways seeds might be carried on the evergreens where you live.

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  5. The poem is difficult to read for me, but the three squares aren’t! I love them! And I always have loved that my English has improved so much through reading your posts (and poems)….

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    1. Simone, is the poem difficult for you to read because there is so much metaphor? That’s my guess. Also, some of the language is probably heavily culturally oriented.

      Here’s what Google translate has to offer; I have no idea if it will be easier to read or not!

      Onder de grote circustent

      Ik sta bij de gootsteen in de keuken
      om een ​​pilletje in te nemen,
      dat pilletje, denk ik,
      is eigenlijk
      een toegangskaartje voor Ringling Brothers Barnum & Bailey
      voor een kleine act
      die zich afspeelt
      buiten het raam:
      een acrobaat, gekleed
      in een kostuum met
      een pluizige grijze staart –
      een kostuum dat misschien onlangs nog gedragen werd door een politieke demonstrant
      die zwaaide met een bordje met de tekst ‘IK BEN GEK OP DEMOCRATIE!’? –
      beweegt zich behendig en zonder aarzelen
      over het strakgespannen koord van puntige uiteinden
      bovenop de latten van het schuttinghek
      achter in de tuin,
      en beklimt, zonder vaart te verliezen,
      moeiteloos de helling van de ene kant van het garagedak
      en rent de helling van de andere kant af,
      om vervolgens te dansen door
      het wirwar van slanke, kale takken
      van de wilg, voordat hij
      voorbij de drie ringen springt
      en door de canvasflap van de circustent verdwijnt,
      helemaal niet uitgeput,
      gevoed door niets anders dan
      het hier-is-het-voor-mijn-ogen
      plezier van het bewegen van de ene plek
      naar de andere
      met evenwicht en gratie.

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      In any case, good thing I offer a painting at each post also, a visual rather than verbal offering!

      I am always SO grateful for your command of English; it is a sure bet that if we were relying on my Dutch, our friendship would have just the TINIEST bit of land to stand on!!! THANK YOU!

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      1. I think there are many words, that I would have to look up, so I would really have to sit down with a dictionary… Oh no, I could ask google, like you did ;-)!

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