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When You Least Expect It

Writing Primer
(with thanks to katherine center, and to
karen keough who says, always leave a painting partly unfinished)

i have not set out seeking
information
or instruction, have not
been searching google,
do not have it in mind
to sign up for a class,
and the room where i sit

is in no way
at all
a classroom.

i’m just staring into space,
pencil in hand,
spiral notebook waiting
for the possible start
of a poem. yet,
when i least expect it
edification
bursts into the room

nonetheless,
plunks down in a chair
beside me,
leans over,

grabs the pencil
right out of my hand,
starts scribbling words
along the edge
of the blank page
in front of me
,
underlines the first two,
and goes on to provide
a definition before
leaning back with
a distinct look
of satisfaction.
to wit—
information gap
a writing term
for how to create curiosity
in the audience
by leaving out
crucial information.

don’tcha just want to know
what i’m leaving out here?

dotty seiter

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Milksilk
3 x 3″; watercolor and ink on paper
card #30 in a series of color swatches
2025

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Notes about poem and art:
• “Writing Primer” taps into the joy and wonder I find in life-long learning, the little pings I feel in my brain when synapses fire.
to reach the point where I could post Milksilk took a fair amount of patience as I first had to wait for seed season, then had to locate milkweed pods, next had to paint my swatches, finally had to undertake the many and considerable challenges of capturing a pleasing photograph of those pesky parachute-wannabes. I’ll leave out all but one anecdote from that long photo-shoot story, which is this: picture my having painstakingly set up swatch, pod, and floss in my improvised photography ‘studio’ (think bed with large sheet of white watercolor paper on it, overhead reading lights switched on, iPhone in hand); then picture Dave’s walking into what he thought was a bedroom and tossing a piece of clothing onto the foot of the bed.



10 responses to “When You Least Expect It”

  1. Thank you for the morning chuckle! I am always trying new places for my “photo Studio”! On my bed, western light from the window! Northern light from end of studio, plus lots of clutter.

    I agree, most of the more interesting works are when your mind and eye have to fill in the blanks, plus the little surprises you weren’t quite expecting!

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    1. Carol, thanks for laughing with me! Laughter is one of the great gifts of life, no two ways about it.

      OMG, when Dave ever flung his clothes onto the foot of my studio setup thinking it was his bed hahaha. That milkweed silk was laughing with delight and hilarity!

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    Joyful Puttering

    For some reason I was unable to link to your blog to comment. It’s probably something on my end. It says that I can reply by email…so I’ll give this a try.

    I DO want to know what you’re leaving out….but I love the poem as it is!

    But what I love most is the image of you and and wrangling your milk weed pods for their photo shoot…and Dave walking in and plopping something on the bed. I can picture the whole thing….and it makes me smile.

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    1. MaryAnn, I appreciate your effort to find a workaround so you could comment when you weren’t able to reply by email. Glad you found a way since I would not have been able to sort that kind of cyber snafu.

      Knowing what to leave out when in the act of creating is an art I’m exploring more consciously of late than in the past. For example, sometimes I set myself the challenge of taking something I’ve written which feels “just right” to me and see if I can reduce it by, say, 50 words. More times than not what I end up with is even “more right,” to my surprise and pleasure and edification.

      Love that you loved the milkweed wrestling match story as much as I did! Those wisps were a challenge, gotta say, and the whole effort had a bit of a slapstick quality to it!

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  3. I want to know! I want to know what you left out! Love the poem, love the swatch, love that Dave caused a near wardrobe failure in the art fashion photo shoot! Life and art merging! YES!

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    1. hmmmmm … maybe what got left out here will appear in another poem! But how will you know?!! Love your characterization: a near wardrobe failure in the art fashion photo shoot! It was classic and hilariously calamitous! Riotously good fun every which way.

      LOVE all your responses here, Lola.

      xoxo

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  4. 😆😆😆😆

    Oh Dotty, thank you for these giggles!

    What is it?! Hahaha!

    Woosh! Woops! Hahaha!

    Am I seeing painted wispy silk, or just the real thing? Either way, I love this swatch. Your seeds look like little birds that are flocking together. 😆

    Thank you for another fabulous post, Dotty!

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    1. Sheila, I so appreciate your giggles! High jinx came into play in both poem and elements of the swatch photo shoot!

      In the photo you are seeing actual wispy silk, but I painted the swatch itself to capture an impression of few wisps, too.

      Thank you for your comments and questions!

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  5. L.O.L. re Dad!! Poor guy can’t even walk into a room!!

    xoxo to you both 😅

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    1. omg, SOOOO hilarious when Pal tossed his shirt onto the bed!!!

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