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Offering

So Many Small Somethings to Notice, November 2025

into the day
comes invitation:
to plant the feet,
to notice.

so, each in turn, we offer our attention.

i offer my attention
to the hammered-silver earrings
on top of the chest of drawers

and the reflection of the overhead
lightbulb in my tea,
to the tiny scratches on the table
and the torn corner of the crinkled tissue
i am about to discard.

we wonder,
what if
we let it change us,
this attentiveness?

i offer my attention
to the freckle—no, age spot—on my right forearm
and the keyhole in the drawer of the oak sideboard,
to the uneven edge of a ripped-open envelope flap
and the severed stem of the mini-pumpkin
on the hutch.

to the cloudiness of the salt shaker glass
and the circular nipple image
on my leather keychain,
to the walnut-sized rock from bald mountain
placed on the radiator cover

and the silkiness of a peach-colored rose petal.

to the drape of a strand of hair
on the chair
and the small red berries
on the paper napkin beside me
,
to the permanent spot
on the right lens of my eyeglasses
and the hand-basted stitches in the quilt
hanging on the wall at a tilt
.

what if ?
what if we let our attention
to the small somethings
in the world
the lightbulb in the tea,
the red berries,
the pumpkin stem,
the hand-basted stitches

change us?

what
if we let it change us?

JM, LH, AP, DS

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Each Moment Allowed to Be Itself
3 x 3″; watercolor mounted on folded hand-pressed paper
card #33 in a series of color swatches
2025

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Notes about poem and art:
• Longtime friends and I gathered for lunch in early November to celebrate the completion of a chemotherapeutic plan of treatment for one of us. As part of our time together, we each turned our focused attention to identifying four small somethings in our immediate surroundings. Using the lists we jotted down, I drafted “So Many.”
• I created Each Moment in advance of our get-together, painting a second autumnal-maple-leaf color-swatch card which I then mounted on hand-pressed paper from my stash. After the fact, I composed our poem and transcribed it onto a folded sheet of cream-colored paper to tuck into the card depicted above. So many small somethings to notice. So much presence in noticing what is right before us here and now.



21 responses to “Offering”

  1. Your poem shows me how many small things that go un-noticed, that should be noticed. That there is so much beauty that we are surrounded with. I for sure, soon I will be starting my 9th decade, am so grateful. For one the ability of just opening my computer, reading and commenting, not to be taken for granted!

    Your bright leaves leave me speechless. My inside child, kicking the fall leaves on the way to school!

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    1. Carol, thank you for your tender comments. The close attention through our senses to that which immediately surrounds us is transformative—love your offering your attention to “the ability of just opening my computer, reading and commenting.” Yes, yes, and yes! And I’m so happy for your inside self to have the chance to kick fall leaves on the way to school!

      When is your birthday?? ❤️

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      1. Shhhhhhhh! January 14th!

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        1. shhhhhhhhh! exciting milestone!

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  2. Beautifully crafted, Dotty. Such a treat to see how each contribution came together in prose 💕

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    1. Linda! Good morning! Thank you for your comments AND contributions.

      Was it you and I together with Pat one time when she encouraged us to take note of where our feet were planted and to bring out attention RIGHT THERE? Or was it the three of us and you were the encourager? In any case, here we are practicing just that, and it feels fitting to have Pat here with us in spirit.

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    Joyful Puttering

    Oh my….I am smitten….and moved by your collective noticing of the small things and what if poem. What a wonderful gift to give each other and to us. Thank you for this today Dotty!

    From my couch perch where I sit every morning with my computer I notice….

    the reflection of Margie’s little Christmas tree in the glass of the TV room doors. It’s been up for weeks.

    the perfectly imperfect squishy pillow I made for the couch out of a blue and white polka dotted cotton sweater.

    the bluebirds busy at the mealworm feeder. I’m so glad they’re back after being away for much of the summer. I love that I can see the feeder from the couch…and the puzzle table.

    the pile of magnets still on the coffee table from a visit from Liam…my 4 year old neighbor. The magnets were the favorite toy of the day.

    Thank you for reminding me that the small things can change me. What a gift this poem was for me today.

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    1. MaryAnn, what a gift to have my poem inspire you to follow suit in noticings, and to share some of them with me on the spot! This noticing is a gift you and I exchange often, for which I am ever grateful.

      the reflection of Margie’s little Christmas tree! yes!
      the imperfect pillow! yes!
      the bluebirds! yes!
      the Liam magnet pile! yes!

      The noticing changes us in joyful ways : )

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  4. I find myself holding my breath.

    Can it be? So much synchronicity?

    I have been noticing lately. Noticing that I have spent most of my life NOT noticing – a result of trauma, protectiveness and so much denial. And now, free from the weight of that, I notice and notice and notice. It is exquisite. (as is your art, as are your words, as are you) xoxoxo

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    1. Holy synchronicity and noticing, Batman! And I do mean holy. The noticing is sacred ground. I, too, have been noticing and noticing, and then noticing how the noticing changes me in ways that bring peace that passes understanding to any moment of … noticing.

      Thank you for your words here, Lola, and for the open-hearteded sharing at your own blog; I’ve begun watching your questions-and-conversation-with-Carl video. Wow.

      xoxoxo

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      1. I am nodding enthusiastically as I read your words. Holy indeed!

        Thanks so much for watching! More espisodes to come. It touched me in ways I did not anticipate! I think I got as much out of it as the winner did! xo

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  5. Beautiful poem Dotty.

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    1. Thea, thank you! This one presented engaging challenges—I’ve participated in contributing to several spontaneous collaborative poems during Zoom workshops, but this was the first time I was facilitator and ‘editor’ of such a collaboration and the first time in my limited collaborative poetry experience that the collaboration would be seen by other than its collaborators, therefore requiring some creative collagen to hold it together in a way that would make sense to readers.

      I appreciate your popping in to comment : )

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  6. What a super idea! How fun! The images in my head were so vivid. And I love the swatch! So moody, mysterious… sacred. Bravo, Dotty! xoxo

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    1. Sheila, totally fun! Thank you! I got the idea from a poetry Zoom class with poet Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer. Putting a version of the concept together with friends provided engaging little conundrums that differed from the class. The practice of noticing has stuck to my ribs.

      Moody, mysterious, sacred—thank you for these descriptors for the swatch.

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  7. I think only poets (and painters maybe) have the ability to point these things out to us. To look, really look, notice. What’s really going on here.

    Thanks for your ongoing inspiration!

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    1. Simone, thank you for your reflection on the ability to ‘look, really look, notice.’ I’m suddenly remembering a time in my family life from when I was 17, and all my sisters younger than I, and one of them commented, “If there’s a daffodil, Dotty is the one who will notice it,” and they nicknamed me Daffodil Dotty for awhile; I think it was a way for my family to name the part of me that already was writing a tiny bit of poetry : )

      One of the gifts is that noticing begets more noticing. And, therefore, more presence.

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      1. What a wonderful nickname to get. Coincidentally, the very first word that Hebe spoke was: ‘Poem’ (pronounce Pum) (which was short for Bloem – flower). She was pointing at a daffodil at that moment.

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        1. LOVE the coincidental pum/bloem Hebe story ❤️

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