The Paintbrush of Impatience
watercolor class
not as expected but so
what, grandma moses’
brush dashes, splashes color,
paints its own way to flow zone
—dotty seiter
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10.5 x 8″; watercolor and ink on paper
landscape
2025
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Notes about poem and art:
• “Paintbrush” is a tanka, a poetic form about which I knew nothing until this summer—31 syllables arranged in 5 lines (if in English) of 5, 7, 5, 7, 7, with no rhyme nor specified meter. I elected to follow the syllabics to ‘force’ myself to tell a story succinctly. Further, by definition, the third line must transition from descriptive and image-focused beginning lines (called kami-no-ku) into a reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines (shimo-no-ku). The subject matter can vary, but many poets choose a subject that’s emotionally stirring or quietly profound. I wasn’t aware of the content guidelines for tanka, so any adherence to those constraints was accidental on my part!
• I recently availed myself of a watercolor workshop offered at a local senior center. We were given a photo reference of the barn at Cogswell’s Grant located in nearby Essex, MA. I’m pretty much a newbie when it comes to watercolor and I’ve had little instruction or practice in drawing but, what the heck, in for a penny in for a pound. I have plenty of experience with (a) not knowing what I’m doing, (b) experimenting to see what happens, and (c) impatience, and I tapped into all three with this watercolor study.


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