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Hypnagogic Hints

Even as My Empty Hand Reaches

my head heavy
on my pillow
consciousness in a slide
from wakefulness
to sleep
i notice my mind
composing lines
of poetry
lush phrases
intricate cadences
meaning-dense metaphors
that—
in the dark
of night
in the presence
of gravity’s pull on my body
in the absence
of paper and pencil at hand—
evaporate
into a breathing
micro-mist

create a biome
for deep deep

dreams

i wonder

will the dreams
reach a dewpoint
in the light
of some bright
morning
and recondense
into poems?

dotty seiter

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Notes about poem and art:
If today’s poem had a hypnagogic origin, I have no recollection!
All the Honey is the second of Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer’s poetry collections I’ve purchased. I got one copy for myself and one to give. I then needed, and so painted, a bookmark for each.



12 responses to “Hypnagogic Hints”

  1. Joyful Puttering Avatar
    Joyful Puttering

    So much happens when we lay our heads on our pillows and likely informs what follows. Your poem is a lovely result of your dreams.

    Then…creating the matching bookmark was inspired!

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    1. So many magnificent mysteries when awake and when asleep! What a gift to tap into them, what a gift to have friends with whom to share the playground of my inspiration and to get inspiring feedback as icing on the cake. Thank you, MaryAnn.

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  2. I think the decision to follow your desire to make poetry is so good!

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    1. Yes, yes, yes, sure feels like a heart-opening energizing decision from where I sit! Thanks, Simone : )

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  3. oh my goodness gracious! Your poetry sings! Resonates! Reaches deep within and calls out hidden thoughts and feelings. The bookmarks! The book!!!!! I am so loving the first volume of her work, which I purchased because of reading her poetry right here! And now to read something my dear friend wrote, married with the art, frolicking with the book cover divine, I say!

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    1. Lola! So energized to hear that my poetry “sings, resonates, reaches deep with and calls out hidden thoughts and feelings”—wow.

      If/when you purchase All the Honey, let me know. There are incipient bookmarks sitting here. Just saying!!!

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      1. ordering it right now! Woooohoooo!

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  4. LOL! guess I’ve got some work/play to do—yay!

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  5. Your poetry brought to mind the story of Ruth Stone running home when she felt a poem chasing her so she could get to a pen and paper before it caught her and left. Told by Elizabeth Gilbert on a Ted talk.

    I love those bookmarks, so fitting for that book. Not familiar with this poet, I will look her up.

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    1. Carol, I JUST finished reading Elizabeth Gilbert’s BIG MAGIC (for the 5th time) in which she tells the story of Ruth Stone : )

      Thanks for your nod to the “so fitting for that book” bookmarks—great fun to create.

      Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer <wordwoman.com> is well worth looking up.

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